After
so much money has flowed into China due to their cheap labor costs some of it
is finally coming back. In “Choose
me! No, me!” The Economist, a
prominent financial magazine with a mainly educated, older audience, paints a
picture of how small town American politicians are looking towards Chinese
investors as a way of supplying jobs.
One strategy that helps get the essays point across is the way in which
it is structured. The article
starts out by talking about a specific Alabaman mayor, Sheldon Day. Day is spotlighted because he has visited
China a few times all in an effort to bring back jobs, and has even done so
through his convincing of one company to build its first factory on U.S.
soil. From this specific example
zooms out wide to talk about the topic on a nation wide scale talking about
such things as China’s direct investments in America raising by about 71% a
year between 2008 and 2012. After
this it cites a few more specific examples only spending about a sentence or
two on each. From there it moves
more to the controversy of the topic, talking about how some people are
reluctant to let their mayors spend their tax money on expensive trips to
China, and if it’s really something that they should be doing. The last thing the article does is
leave it on a controversy, that an Alabaman business delegation said that they
would love to gain investments from a Chinese company, Huawei, which has been
accused of cyber spying by people in Washington. It uses this to come full circle saying that Mayor Day would
not go that far. This structuring
worked well because it showed a little bit of everything and flowed well. It talked about specifics and the
overall, positives and the negatives and the extent to which it would go. In all the way this essay was written
furthered the points they were trying to get across effectively.
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